I tap the back of the pen against my forehead,
And glance over to the clock.
The boredom and tension of the room is palpable,
Every student is looking around,
Hoping for something even mildly interesting to happen.
I lean back on my chair,
My feet start tapping on the ground,
I hastily scribble a line of Simon Commission,
Marvelling that highlighting points did help after all.
I lean further back and the chair’s front legs get lifted from the floor,
I think hard and another line comes to my head,
But just as I’m about to write,
I realize that I’ve pushed the chair too far,
And the next thing I know the air is knocked out of me,
And BAM!
I hit the floor,
The thud of the fall snapped kids to attention.
A round of muffled laughter erupts from the classroom,
Everyone glad for the distraction,
I get up, slightly flushed, and sit back down,
Surprisingly finding myself fighting a smile.
The teacher bangs her duster on the table,
Demanding “pin-drop silence”.
In just a moment, the glee is gone,
And a hush falls over the class,
As everybody starts wracking their brain for non-elusive answers,
Slipping once again into the surrealism of the exam.
~Nehal
Credits for the prompt go to Tiction @ Fictionally Crazy! Thanks, lah 😃. So, I wrote this without giving too much thought, and it turned out fine. It would have been much better as a short story, I guess, but I am too lazy to change it now. I’m just mostly glad that there’s still a part of me that can write poems and stories that aren’t all sad 😂. I hope you liked it!!

wow lovely poem, describes the tension and also made me reminded I have exams next month.😂😂 explained in words soo nicely. loved it❤️
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I have boards at the end of November too!! 😭
All the best! And thanks so much, Anushka!! 😁
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Wonderful poem. Brought back memories. It’s been ages since I gave an offline exam 😒 Little did I imagine I would miss it!!! Simon commission? If I may ask, are you in grade 8, CBSE?
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I too kinda miss offline exams, but online ka experience is something else altogether! 😉
And no, I’m in grade 10, ICSE 😂.
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Online exams are never honest 😉…. Or are they?
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Never! 😌😆
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This hits different considering the fact that I’ve my pre board exams currently going on👀
Like…every one is tense and andjknknskdnjnjdnbdfj
Thank you so much for enlightening us with this wonderful poem😭♥✨🤧
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All the best for your pre-boards, hope studying for them doesn’t’t end up killing you before your boards 😂.
Thanks so much, I’m glad you liked it!! 😃
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oooh nice one Narwhale. It felt like I was riiight there.😁😁😁
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Thenkoo September 😀. Glad to know thou liked it!
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Haha, this was great, Nehal!
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Thanks a lot, Blue!! 🤩
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Playing with the chair is fun until the time comes where we fall on the ground and everyone laughs
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I know right! 😂
I’ve become an expert, I never fall 😎.
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This had me grinning! I’d say this situation would actually be way preferable to the terror and nervousness that clouds the atmosphere whenever I take exams. A bit of humor never hurts! 🤣
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I know right! Giving exams is just boring. And stressful! 😂
Thanks a lot, Naemi!! 🤗
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Lol! What an attention seeker you are in the class, going to the extent of falling down! Nehal, you are a hoot, sweetheart! 😂❤️
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Hey, that’s fiction! I never fall down on purpose!! 😂
Thanks a lot, though!
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I was pulling your leg and you fell! 😂
You are welcome. You are a very entertaining writer. 🥰
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Oh no! 😂
And oh gosh, thank you so much, that really means a lot! 😍
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Oh this one was so much fun nehal!
I remember tohave giggled actually when some people used to strangely fell on their butts due to exhaustion or dehydration during assemblies😂( I MEAN HOW DID THESE PEOPLE DO IT?)
~Kunjal
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They probably pretended to pass out so they could get away from the torture. The idea had crossed into my mind too but I didn’t act upon it 🤣.
Thanks a lot, Kunjal! 😃
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Have I already read this? I remember laughing at this. But anyways, great poem Nehu!
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Yeah, you have. You told me its worth posting so I finally did, didi 🙂.
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Oh😂
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Haha, offline exams are fun! I always finish taking them hours before the submission time – that way, I get plenty of time to people watch (people do some pretty dumb things when they’re bored) 😂
But then again, online exans aren’t a bad bargain…👀😇
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Oh nothing can beat the actual freak-out-modes that attack students in offline exams, but online is definitely more convenient for people like me 😆.
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Ahhh, LOVE THIS Nehal! Makes me wish I could stare around during exams but its so strict in our school, if you even happen to so much as glance at someone else, you land straight out of the exam hall. Its sad 🤣
But this poem, I love it so much 😍
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Oh, rules are kinda strict here too. But we still manage to do a lot 😂.
And gosh, thanks so much! I’m really glad you liked it!! 🤧😍
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sooooo truuuuuueeeeeeeeeee!
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I knowwwww..😆
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I. HATE. EXAMS.
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And I love them 🙂.
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Awesome!!! This is soooo tru! Anyway I just found your blog and i’m exploring and not liking your posts cause for some reason it won’t let me! Aaah anyway awesome post!!! They all are 🙂
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Hey, it’s fine, don’t worry. And thanks so much for reading! I’m glad you enjoyed my posts 😃.
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yep!!!
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i thoroughly enjoyed it man !
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Ah, thanks so much!!! 😃
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